Black hot liquid pours away the night, the unusual dreams.
She asks, “What would you do if you were me?
“Get the surgery! It’s like a spider on your skin!” He rises, tosses the newspaper into the trash. Walks away.
She lets the vapor curl into her nostrils.
Asked.
Answered.
Photo: Kathryn Henneman
Thank you to Vincent Mars for this challenge to write a 50-word story.
http://dailypost.wordpress.com/2014/04/07/writing-challenge-fifty/
Weekly Writing Challenge: Fifty
by Vincent Mars on April 7, 2014
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I like the ending. “Asked. Answered.” Succinct perfection.
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Exciting story. I like your style and enjoyed reading your post. My favourite line is, ‘She lets the vapor curl into her nostrils.’
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“vapor curl into her nostrils” – What a great line and an exciting story!
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Hey! This post couldn’t be written any better!
Reading this post reminds me of my old room mate!
He always kept talking about this. I will forward this article to him.
Fairly certain he will have a good read. Many thanks for sharing!
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