Black hot liquid pours away the night, the unusual dreams.
She asks, “What would you do if you were me?
“Get the surgery! It’s like a spider on your skin!” He rises, tosses the newspaper into the trash. Walks away.
She lets the vapor curl into her nostrils.
Photo: Kathryn Henneman
Thank you to Vincent Mars for this challenge to write a 50-word story.
Weekly Writing Challenge: Fifty
by Vincent Mars on April 7, 2014
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Brain wants fluid
movement but the
feet see fits and
starts. Apace a
step a tap a
turn matching stir
of dancing hearts.
Hand over hand
slide under slide
all are playing.
To pass and meet
circling back to
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